please answer this question- to remove the slangs and buzz works and wordiness.
a) Although our last presentation failed, we think that our new one will be a success.
"bombed" is replaced with "failed" as it is a slang.
"beyond the shadow of a doubt our new presentation will fly" is replaced with "our new one will be a success" to remove slang and wordiness.
b) If you refer back to the budget, you will see that there are provisions that prevent the budget to fail.
"will" is removed.Because in a conditional clause, If you have future tense (will) in the second half, you will have a present tense in the first half.
"blowing the budget" is replaced with "budget to fail" to remove slang.
please answer this question- to remove the slangs and buzz works and wordiness. basis. 6.6 Clichés,...
each of the employees lunch in the company Chapter 6 Assignment < Back to Assignment Attempts: Average: 11 4. Revising for Clarity - Dropping Clichés, Avoiding Slang andBuzzwords, Rescuing Buried Verbs, and Controlling Exuberance Wordy and undear writing makes it difficult for your reader to understand your message. During the revision process, revise for clarity by dropping clichés, avoiding slang and buzzwords, rescuing buried verbs, and controlling exuberance. Which of the following are dichés that should be dropped from your...