Question

Instructions: Each example shows a sentence fragment. Provide an edited sentence that fixes the fragment without changing the meaning of the sentence.

1. We should encourage employee participation in cost control. For example, an award for the best money-saving idea.
2. The task force should recommend recycling procedures. In particular, what steps we can take to reduce paper waste.
3. The mail-order industry has several advantages. One of those being the ability to target catalogs at specific demographic groups.
4. The meeting will be simulcast from the Twin Cities. Which will allow viewers in Duluth to watch.
5. This material has many uses. For instance, to repair tissue.
6. Each program makes different use of the input devices. Some uses being more logical than others.
7. Many new companies have entered the industry. Making it more difficult to gain market share.

Answer 1

1. We should encourage the employee participation in cost control through different means such as by rewarding the best money saving idea.

2. The task force should recommend recycling procedures such as those which can lead to reduction of paper waste.

3. Among many advantages of mail order industry, is its ability to  target catalogs at specific demographic groups.

4. The meeting will be simulcast from the Twin Cities, allowing viewers in Duluth to watch

5. This material has multiple applications such as repairing tissues.

6 Each program makes different use of the input devices, which differ in the degree of logic behind them.

7. Gaining market share has become more difficult owing to the entry of many new companies in industry.