5. Rewrite these sets of sentences to combine short, simple sentences and to reduce repetition wherever...
5. Rewrite these sets of sentences to combine short, simple sentences and to reduce repetition wherever possible. An example is given in the box. (10 marks) Original: Angelo's team won the championship. He pitched a two- hitter. He struck out ten batters. He hit a home run. Revised: Angelo's team won the championship because he pitched a two-hitter, struck out ten batters, and hit a home run. a. Bonnie wore shorts. The shorts were red. The shorts had pockets. Revised: b. The deer hunter awoke at 5:00 A.M. He ate a quick breakfast. The breakfast consisted of coffee, juice, and cereal. He was in the woods before the sun came up. Revised: c. My grandparents played golf every weekend for years. Last year they stopped playing. They miss the game now. Revised: d. Fly over any major city. Look out the airplane's window. You will be appalled at the number of tall smokestacks you will see. Revised: e. It did not rain for over three months. Most crops in the region failed. Some farmers were on the brink of declaring bankruptcy. Revised: