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COMM 1106: Use correct verbs and verb forms. In the following passage, correct any errors in verbs and verb forms Can money makes people happy? A well-known proverb says, "Money can't buy happiness, but some people probably would to agree that money is important for a happy life. A survey by Andrew Oswald and Jonathan Gardner of the University of Warwick in England has investigating the connection between money and happiness for eight years. The results are not surprised. If people suddenly get money that they not expecting from the lottery, for example they generally feel more satisfying with their lives. In general, according to the study, receiving about $75,000 must mean the difference between being fairly happy and being very happy. However, people who admitted to be miserable before they had money needed to get $1.5 million before they considered themselves happy. But Oswald and Gardner advise to recognize that the study is not finished They not admit knowing whether the happiness from receiving unexpected money lasts for a long time. People who do not expect getting a large amount of money can find other reasons not to despair. The researchers say that money is not the most important factor in whether a person is happy or not. People who mamed are happier than those who are not the researchers estimate that a lasting marriage makes the partners as happy as an extra $100,000 a year can Perhaps looking for love is as important as trying to make-or win-a large amount of money

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Can money make people happy? A well-known proverb says, “Money can't buy happiness.” But some people probably would agree that money is important for a happy life. A survey by Andrew Oswald and Jonathan Gardner of the University of Warwick in England has investigated the connection between money and happiness for eight years. The results are not surprised. If the people suddenly get the money that they are not expecting- from the lottery, For example-they generally feel more satisfied with their lives.

In general, according to the study, receiving about $75,000 must mean the difference between being fairly happy and being very happy. However, people who admitted to being miserable before had the money needed to get $1.5 million before they.

Considered themselves happy. But Oswald and Gardner advise recognizing that the study is not finished. They do not admit knowing whether happiness from receiving expected money lasts for a long time.

People who do not expect to get a large amount of money can find other reasons not to despair. The researcher says that money is not the most important factor in whether a person is happy or not. People who are married are happier than those who are not. the researchers estimate that a lasting marriage makes the partners as happy as ana extra $100,000 a year can. Perhaps looking for love is as important as trying to make-or win-a large amount of money.