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I mean academy and grammar. (you can edit and add any sentence)
Dear sir/madam,
Greetings!
I hope you are doing great!
I am Sami Alotibi from Saudi Arabia. I came across your Institute named Meridian Institute of Surgical Assisting in Nashville, Tennessee which offers the opportunity to continue my higher education. I have a post-secondary diploma from Ideal Akademy For Health Training (IAHT), Madina, Saudi Arabia. With GPA 3.83 from 5. I am interested in applying for bachelor's degree from Meridian Institute of Surgical Assisting in Nashville.
Currently I am working Assistant Surgeon at the king Fahad Cardiac Center – King Saud University, Riyadh, Saudi Arabia. It allows and support me financially via a scholarship to do my bachelor's degree in USA. However, my scholarship includes one-year English study in United State before I start my Bachelor program. My plan is first to apply for a conditional approval from your institute. Then, I will start my English program for one year. As soon as I finish, I will start my Bachelor program.
I would like to know whether I could have a conditional approval from your institute. Such conditional approval is required from my institute to apply for a scholarship. As I mentioned, the scholarship will cover the cost of my English program (one year) as well as the complete Bachelor program.
Please find attached a copy of passport, the financial guarantee from my sponsor, diploma certificate, recommendations.
Thanks, and Best Regards
Sami
Dear sir/madam,
Meridian Institute of Surgical Assisting,
Nashville.
I am Sami Alotibi from Saudi Arabia. I completed my education in your Institute named Meridian Institute of Surgical Assisting in Nashville, Tennessee which offers the opportunity to continue my higher education. I have a post-secondary diploma from Ideal Akademy For Health Training (IAHT), Madina, Saudi Arabia. With GPA 3.83 from 5. I am interested in applying for bachelor's degree from Meridian Institute of Surgical Assisting in Nashville.
Currently I am working Assistant Surgeon at the king Fahad Cardiac Center – King Saud University, Riyadh, Saudi Arabia. It allows and support me financially via a scholarship to do my bachelor's degree in USA. However, my scholarship includes one-year English study in United State before I start my Bachelor program. My plan is that I want to apply a conditional approval from your institute. Then, I will start my English program for one year as soon as I finish my program , then i will start my Bachelor program.
I would like to know whether I could have a conditional approval from your institute? Such conditional approval is required from my institute to apply for a scholarship. As I mentioned, the scholarship will cover the cost of my English program (one year) as well as the complete Bachelor program.
Please find attached a copy of passport, the financial guarantee from my sponsor, diploma certificate, recommendations.
Thank you sir!
Yours sincerely,
Sami Alotibi,
(your present adress details).
There is a small changes in sentence formate,there is a need to change the format.i do that above you just fill your address details and send an email to your old college.
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