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Dear Sir/Madam: First, I want to thank to SaintFrancis Hospital and all member of staffs for taking care of me during my hospitalization. I was immigrated to US in 2018 and have been looking for a full time job since then. As you may think, it is challenged to me to get a job in the US especially refugee like me who come from a different country. While I was looking for a reliable job time to time, a serious illness has beena part of my life unpredictably and that is how I admitted to SaintFrancis Hospital l, Yaw Min Toonl confirm that I am a single women and have not received financial support from any resources such as friends and others communities. Therefore, I humbly ask your help in considering to waive all my medical expenses I pray that God bless you and the whole community of SaintFrancis abundantly, above and beyond as you caring to those who need help in Christ. Thank again for your kindness and considering my application Sincerely yours,

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Dear Sir/Madam,

Firstly I want to thank Saint Francis Hospital and its staff for taking due care of me during my hospitalization.

I immigrated to the United States in 2018 and have been looking for a full time job ever since. It has been challenging for me to get a job since I am a refugee coming from another country. In the process of looking for a secure job, I encountered a serious illness due to which I had to be admitted to St. Francis Hospital.

I, Yaw Min Toon, confirm that I am a single woman and have not received any financial assistance from any other sources. Hence I humbly ask for your support by waiving off all my medical expenses.

I pray that God bless you and the entire community of Saint Francis Hospital abundantly just as you care for those who are in need.

I thank you for your kindness and considering my application.

Sincerely your’s