Ok so you are confused with unit conversion.
1000kpa=1Mn/m2
It is given in the question about distribution of stress<= 0.1 * vertical stress
Hence;
You need to take the qn =0.1*vertical effective stress
Hence qn =6.1 kpa in first reading.
Thus for the first reading
S=4*0.24*0.0061*0.8*2*1000=9.8 mm
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