Question

Revise the following sentence to correct the Faulty Parallelism:

He is polite, gracious, considerate and has high standards.

Mr. Eagleton reads mysteries, listens to classical music, and he watches television.

I realized I did not have the money for new clothes, the brains for perfect grades, and that not everyone likes the same kind of person.

Answer 1

Correct Sentences are:-

1. CORRECT:  He is not only polite, gracious, considerate but he also has high standards.

2. CORRECT:  Mr. Eagleton reads mysteries, listens to classical music, and watches television.

3. CORRECT: I realized I did not have the money for new clothes, the brains for perfect grades and everyone doesn't like the same kind of people.

Above are the sentences with no faulty parallelism.

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