Question

English 099 BC Paragraph development es that Exercise 1 Exercise 1 che the hat EXAMPLE: (student react to an essay about people and their favourite pets) There are many types of pets in an average household. People will often even choose pets according to their personalities. Some people like small dogs that are easy to take care of and do not demand a lot of attention. Some owners prefer strong or vicious dogs, like bulldogs for example. Other people might like cats because they are independent and really need no attention at all. Birds provide people with a lot of company, if you like bird songs, but their cages need a lot of cleaning. A fish tank is great to look at but the tanks must be cleaned often as well. Some people even treat their plants like pets and talk to them. In a 200, large animals, like polar bears, are left to themselves in their cages. Acceptable_Unacceptable_X_ ANSWER: The paragraph is all about house pets and why people have different types of pets and even prefer different types of pets. The last sentence about animals in a zoo introduces a new topic and breaks the paragraph unity, because even if it is about animals, it is no longer about house pets. Remember: one topic, one paragraph. 1. Thomas uses enumeration well in his essay because from the very start he talks of the seven wonders of the world, and even mentions this in the title. He then says he will list his seven wonders but then changes from the standard one-to-seven list by saying he will keep number one for the last and start with number two. This change keeps us more interested until the end. Thomas then lists bacteria, a beetle, a virus, a cell, a termite, and ends with a human child. Then he finally goes back to number one, the planet Earth. He also uses excellent description when he talks of the termite. 2. Acceptable Unacceptable 3. In conclusion, we see that Thomas has clearly centred his choices of seven wonders in the scientific world, on cells and a virus for example, on the

Answer 1

Here, this is acceptable as throughout the paraghraph, there has been the description of the seven wonders. Hence it abides by the rule of one topic, one paragraph.

Acceptable.