One must include at least three bullet points so that the customer can give a short yet helpful reply for future references.
The second paragraph of the message itself is not categorized in bullet points and hence the customer might feel it as a descriptive and time consuming process and might try to avoid it completely.
The start of the message can be more courteous and there is no requirement to let the customer know about changes that are in process.
It’s always better to show an image with less or no flaws in order to build customer loyalty. A company must present itself as complete and flawless in all aspect of business to establish a strong brand image.
One more area to outline regarding the feedback on the salesperson should be to use a tone more confident in nature instead of asking the customer directly about their behavior, this might make the customer feel that the salespersons are not prompt generally and if there happens to be a very slight mistake the customer can question the company’s training of the salespersons.
Hi Sarah,
Hope you’re doing great.
In reference to the recent return of the merchandise, we would like to have your valuable feedback on the following:
(Please rate on a scale of 1 to 10, 10 being the maximum ranking excellent)
We strive every single day to make your shopping experience enjoyable and convenient.
And you can help better our service by filling the feedback form or by visiting our website www.williams.com.
P.S. We are waiting to know about your shopping experience with us.
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