Question

Apply what we have learned in the course about effective business communication and what the chapter reading says about professional writing. Every semester, I have students bring me examples from their internships and workplaces of people there who have very poor writing skills. A lack of writing skills can result in lost promotions. Rewrite this email in a more professional manner;

“i am confused as to why they are not due intil 11/10 i mean the calendar said that they was due then so thats i did them do i still get credit for them or do i need to due them over on one tape? please let me know thanks. also when are you grading the stuff that we have done?”

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Subject: Seeking Clarity.

Hi.

Hope you are doing okay.

This is in reference to clarity I am seeking regarding issue as to why they are not due until 11:10. Also, mentioned in the calendar that it was due that was the reason I did that.

Please let me know I would still get credit for them or do i need to due them over again? Also, I need the clarity as to when are you grading the stuff that we have done?”

I am obliged for your time,

Thanks and Regards

XYZ.

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