Question

Make the following sentences more clear and concise:

1. In the years after World War I, new technologies changed America. Technology made it possible for millions of people to improve their lives. It also brought great changes in American society.
2. Despite the fact that she was feeling ill, she came to the conclusion that she would go to work.
3. In Edmonton, in Alberta at 11:00 pm in the evening on the first of June, the northern lights gave a wonderful show to people.
4. After booking a ticket to Dallas from a travel agent, I packed my bags and arranged for a taxi to the airport. Once there, I checked in, went through security, and was ready to board. But problems beyond my control led to a three-hour delay before takeoff.

Answer 1

After World war I, new technologies changed America. It improved the lives of millions of people in America. It also creates greater changes in American Society.

Even though she was ill, she decided to go to work.

After finishing the wonderful show of northern lights in Edmonton in Alberta, on 1^st June, I Planned to go to Dallas and got a ticket and I hurried the airport through the Taxi with my packed bags. I was ready at the board after clearing all the check-in process. But still, I was a three-hour delay due to takeoff problems.