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I went to the Dallas Chamber Symphony concert. I got to experience three lovely composers Ralph Vaughan-Williams, Charles Ives and Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart. The instruments consisted in the Ralph V Williams' The Lark Ascending were mainly solo violin, flute like instrument and piano for providing the background to the solo violin. The Charles Ives Symphony No. 3 The Camp Meeting" included instruments such as mainly the violin, flute, strings, trombone and bells, whereas, the Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart's Piano Concerto No. 20 in D Minor consisted of instruments such as flute, trumpets, strings and a solo piano. Movement that was performed in the Ralph's Lark Ascending was Chloe Trevor. The movement performed in the Charles's Symphony No. 3 were the Andante, Allegro and Largo, and the movement portrayed in the Mozart's Piano Concerto No. 20 in D minor were Allegretto,Bove and Allegro assai. Through out the concert violin was the present in every single piece. Classical, romantic and twentieth century music was the music that was being played. Different form were present throughout the concert ranging from sonata to rondo form. The two pieces that stuck out during the performance that day were mainly the Ralph's and the Mozart's one. The Ralph's piece consisted mainly of strings in a orchestra fashion, and the Mozart's piece consisted of the entire orchestra and would usually increase the tension rapidly. The entirety of the Ralph's piece was around fifteen minutes, whereas the entirety of the Mozart's piece was around thirty minutes long.

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I went to the Dallas Chamber Symphony concert . I got to experience three lovely composers Ralph Vaughan Williams, Charles Ives and Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart. The 'Lark Ascending of Ralph Vaughan Williams consisted of instruments such as solo violin ,flute like instruments and piano for providing background to the solo violin . The Charles Ives Symphony No 3 'The Camp Meeting ' included instruments such as mainly violin ,flute ,strings ,trombone and bells whereas ,the Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart's Piano Concerto No.20 in D Minor consisted of instruments such as flute , trumpets,strings ,and a solo piano .

The movement performed in the Ralph's Lark Ascending was Chole Trevor . The movement performed in the Charles Ives Symphony No.3 were Andante ,Allegro ,and Largo and the movement portrayed in the Mozart's Piano Concerto No.20 in D minor were Allegretto ,Romanze and Allegro assai . Through out the concert violin was present in every single piece . Classical , Romantic and Twentieth century music was the music being played. Different forms of music were present through out the concert ranging from sonata to rondo .

The two pieces that stuck out during the performance that day was the Ralph's and Mozart's one . The Ralph's piece consisted mainly of strings ina orchestra fashion and the Mozart's piece consisted of the entire orchestra that would usually increase the tension rapidly . The entirety of the Ralph's piece was around fifteen minutes ,whereas the entirety of the Mozart's piece was around thirty minutes long.