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Answer 1

Strong Thesis Statement is one which is ----

* Specific

* Precise

* Can be argued

* Confidently stated

* Forceful

Weak thesis statement----when it makes an unreasonable statement, a personal belief or something that noone can disagree.

1) Because of the industrial revolution , the notion of the family took on an entirely new cultural meaning.

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2)Many prople have different opinions on whether people under 21 should be able to drink alcohol and I agree with some of these.

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3) Although their names are often linked together ,Emerson and Theoreau viewed nature from very different perspective.

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4) Teenage alcoholism rates are even increasing due to parental influence ,peer pressure and the media.

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5) In the twentieth century, genetic engineering has become a reality that arouses both astonishment and fear.

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6) I truly believe drugs should be legal Because it helps patients with cancer deal with their pain.

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7) I researched the causes of ancrexia and major causes are peer pressure and television.

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8) George Washington is considered one of America's greatest president due to his political , cultural and military influence.

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9) Adolescent obesity is increasing due to fast food restaurants.

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10) Because half of all American elementary school children consume nine times the recommand ed daily allowance of sugar, schools should be required to replace the beverages in doda machines with healthy alternatives

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