Question

Instructions: Below you are given 10 sentences that are badly written. Please re-write/edit the sentences in the way that would make them clear and concise. Keep the original sentences in red and type your sentence with edits below each sentence.

1. The results are shown in Table 3 , which shows that language teachers in general , regardless of their nationalies or their year of experience , have a very low level of preparation and training in teaching children with dyslexia , either on the personal or institutional level , and in language preparation programs .

2. Overall this project allowed me to research and develop a different aspect of a familiar topic and have a better understanding of a large complex system that I have a large interest in

3. Similarly, Sigal and his colleagues agreed to the claim above by conducting an experiment on mice, concluding that the neoplastic effect on mammary glands in mice is due to the presence of BPA4.

4. In that sense, experiencing art can certainly make people feel more relaxed in today's very much stress-filled society.
5. The theory is applicable to clinical practice, as it can be implemented in nursing diagnosis, nursing goals, and nursing outcomes.

6. The main issue of concern is the perspective on international business as well as partnership (Kenworth, 2009).

7. In this paper, I will make some changes to the problems and will present a combination of items together which can solve the problems of an auto-oriented transportation system.

8. Why do you believe many people hold up the idea of a traditional family or the modern marriage as a benchmark against which families or marriages are judged?

9. An odds ratio was calculated to represent the strength of association that was presented in this study.

10. I haven't started writing the question for the survey yet also I have missed some of my deadlines as I took up more time than expected on both preparing and having an exam.

Answer 1

1. The results shown in Table 3 reveal that irrespective of their nationality or experience, language teachers receive poor preparation and training to teach children with dyslexia at personal, program and institutional levels.
2. Overall, this project allowed me to develop a better understanding of a different aspect of a complex topic I am already familiar with and interested in.
3. Similarly, Sigal and his colleagues' experiment indicated that the neoplastic effect on mammary glands in mice is due to the presence of BPA4, thereby agreeing with the claim above.
4. In that sense, the experience of art can certainly make people feel more relaxed, particularly in the stressful environments of modern society.

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