Question

I have been struggling in this course with grammar and structure. Maybe the overall approach of my assignments. I have been trying so hard to do better but my professor cannot help. How can I improve this paper? I have tried Grammarly.

The question is: Visit a major network news Web site and view a video of a commentator such as Rachel Maddow or Keith Olbermann (MSNBC) or Glenn Beck or Bill O’Reilly (Fox News). Identify the commentator’s point of view. If you were giving a presentation to inform, would you express your point of view in a similar style?

My response is...

Rachel Maddow from MSNBC presented informational content on a current situation involving beginning processes in President Trump's impeachment proceeding. As well as the whistleblower complaints about the president's dealings with Ukraine. Revelations were released previously, then reviewed by Maddow with neutral language. She spoke confidently referring to factual information rather than personal opinion. Remaining not very favorable for some issues, and not very harmful for others. The resources were credited accordingly, providing credible unbias facts. She continuously had questions to endure further into the topic, backed up with factual sources and statements that kept the neutral tone. The way the information Maddow communicated maintained professional un-bias interpretation. Therefore she was presenting exposition for the public, clearly expressing a complex topic with factual content. Her purpose was to inform and educate the audience.

From a personal perspective of giving a presentation to inform, expressing a personal point of view in a similar style resembles professionalism. Such a style increases the ability to understand content from the audience and helps influence skills for better communication. The audience needs to grasp the information provided to them. Bias information can cause confusion and loss of the audience. Not everyone is going to agree with a bias opinion. The purpose of the information may keep misinterpreted at this point, which lacks professionalism. Rachel Maddow also shared some more information that she gathered. Her ability to change the audience's perceptions to educate further into the national news helped support professional approaches to the highlighted information. Change in perception is a unique tool that can be used to keep an audience actively involved and listening. Professionalism will help gain respect, and that is why this presentation to inform has an opportunity to express a personal point of view that is highly beneficial.

Answer 1

Hey, I tried my best in correcting the whole response, I just found a few corrections (passive voices, using alternate words) and the rest is same. And below is the result. If this helps don't forget to rate this answer. Thank you!

Rachel Maddow from MSNBC presented informational content on a current situation involving beginning processes in President Trump's impeachment proceeding. As well as the whistleblower complaints about the president's dealings with Ukraine. Revelations were released before, then reviewed by Maddow with neutral language. She spoke confidently referring to factual information than opinion. Remaining not very favorable for some issues, and not very harmful for others. The resources were credited so, providing credible un-bias facts. She continuously had questions to endure further into the topic, backed up with factual sources and statements that kept the neutral tone. The way the information Maddow communicated maintained professional un-bias interpretation. Therefore she was presenting exposition for the public, clearly expressing a complex topic with factual content. Her purpose was to tell and educate the audience.

From a personal perspective of giving a presentation to tell, expressing a personal point of view in a similar style resembles professionalism. Such a style increases the ability to understand content from the audience and helps influence skills for better communication. The audience needs to grasp the information provided to them. Bias information can cause confusion and loss of the audience. Not everyone is going to agree with a bias opinion. The purpose of the information may keep misinterpreted at this point, which lacks professionalism. Rachel Maddow also shared some more information that she gathered. Her ability to change the audience's perceptions to educate further into the national news helped support professional approaches to the highlighted information. Change in perception is a unique tool that can be used to keep an audience actively involved and listening. Professionalism will help gain respect, and that is why this presentation to tell has an opportunity to express a personal point of view that is highly beneficial.