Nanaimo Sports Centre
Vancouver Branch
8791 Austin Street
Vancouver, BC Y2P 2P8
November 27, 2019
Ms. R. Ferguson
Ferguson Athletic Apparel
315 Massey Cr.
Port Moody, BC Z6T 3B5
Dear Ms. Ferguson:
Nanaimo Sports Centre is a dedicated organization for high school youngsters, they have been running a program called Nanaimo Sports with an intention to achieve the bigger objective of providing the school youngsters with sports-related equipment and environment.
They operate and find work with local businesses, also are constantly working to learn and expand their business. A dedicated effort for such a noble cause should be good enough for people like us to support and motivate.
In regard to the above-mentioned details we are allocating a dedicated Sports center for Nanaimo for which we have chosen a donation amount of $28.00, but we would request you to be generous and contribute a bigger amount for such a noble cause to operate and flourish. It is due to the donations from people like you, teenagers around 430 will get a chance to participate in Nanaimo Sports activities.
We believe your early donation could fulfil the dreams of many teenager
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